CWC Creative Writing Club

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    Evyyy! Xxx

    Posts : 3
    Join date : 2009-05-27
    Age : 22

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    Post  Evyyy! Xxx on Thu Jun 04, 2009 7:55 pm

    The year was 2003, it was a hot day, In sunny Florida. My family and I went on the Lazy River. I was only 8 and to small to control a rubber ring, so I shared a double with my dad, as he closed his eyes and relaxed, I took in all the smells, doughnuts, burgers and chips, typical Floridian food. As my dad lay there, I stood up very carefully, as I didn’t want to disturb my dad.n My mum and brother were slightly ahead and watching, I jumped into the water filled with leaves and twigs, but as I did, my dad flipped over in the ring. My family burst out laughing at him, but he didn’t find it very amusing, but eventually he stopped being grumpy, gave in and joined in with the laughing.
    Mrs P

    Posts : 15
    Join date : 2009-05-19
    Age : 36
    Location : Stoke-On-Trent

    dads hey- you cant take them anywhere!

    Post  Mrs P on Fri Jun 05, 2009 10:21 pm

    Evy- fab memory- you use your sense of smell especially well to describe the setting. It's quite hard to be descriptive when telling funny stories, but this is a good first try. Thanks for sharing.

    Mrs Posthill

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