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    mr posthill

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    Mini Saga Competition!

    Post  mr posthill on Mon Jun 08, 2009 12:26 pm

    MINI SAGA COMPETITION!!!


    Okay Ladies and Gentleman welcome to a new competition for the Creative Writing Club.

    We want you to write a story...sounds simple doesn't it?
    well its not that easy. Your story must be no longer than 50 words and must have a clear beginning, middle and an end.
    Your story can be about anything you like. It might: have a twist at the end, contain speech, it can use similes and / or metaphors. However...
    IT MUST NOT BE MORE THAN 50 WORDS IN LENGTH!

    The competition is open to any student from any year group in any school (lets make this eclectic). All entries must be submitted into this topic forum and will be judged by myself and my selected team. All entries must be submitted by no later than Friday 26th June (That's nearly three weeks). You can enter as many times as you like but make sure that each entry is on a seprate post.
    And for those of you still looking for inspiration...read on!



    The rain was pouring as I trudged home.
    Mum was at work. No-one would be home.
    But, as I got closer, the door was ajar.
    I pushed it. Suddenly, a shadow dashed across the doorway.
    Sweat beaded my forehead, taking a breath I stepped in…
    “SUPRISE…HAPPY BIRTHDAY!” Yelled my family.


    Good Luck Everyone! Wink
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    kayleigh1104

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    ??

    Post  kayleigh1104 on Wed Jun 10, 2009 9:13 pm

    Sir thats 51 if you count it your self and i didnt count no-one as 2 words lol!
    And i counted it about 4 times lol

    mr posthill

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    Re: Mini Saga Competition!

    Post  mr posthill on Thu Jun 11, 2009 11:42 am

    Okay okay its 51...see i said it was tough!
    get rid of It from 'I pushed it'.
    There!
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    kayleigh1104

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    lol

    Post  kayleigh1104 on Thu Jun 11, 2009 5:57 pm

    hahaha
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    naboolio

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    Age : 22

    Re: Mini Saga Competition!

    Post  naboolio on Thu Jun 11, 2009 7:27 pm

    I looked down the steep hill my heart started to beat harder I heared the shouting of the angry croud their faces red with disappointment" you promised us a less polluted river" " you didn't even show up" we could see your heart was not in it"
    clouds started to build. Very Happy

    Alice

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    Age : 22
    Location : Crewe

    Re: Mini Saga Competition!

    Post  Alice on Thu Jun 11, 2009 11:15 pm

    The boy stared, an evil glare. He spotted his target. "Go on lads!" He shouted. "Go on, do it!" They walked towards this thing. The boys surrounded the target, a look of fear. Pure, Pure fear. Would anyone help? Noone was around. This poor defenceless thing. Alone. All alone. Forever.
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    foxi

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    Age : 23
    Location : stafford

    little scar

    Post  foxi on Fri Jun 12, 2009 11:39 am

    I was walking along a dark and wet alley way when I heard a splash in one of the tiny puddles it wasn’t me I started to walk faster then I heard another I started to run then all of a sudden a little creature jump out, a little cat!

    MPrime10

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    Re: Mini Saga Competition!

    Post  MPrime10 on Fri Jun 12, 2009 11:40 am

    I slowly walked into the woods. There it was it took me by surprise it was the famous big foot he said “hello my friend.” I started running out of the woods I could hear myself breathing heavily I looked back. it had gone, I turned around it was there.
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    window licker

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    the old women

    Post  window licker on Fri Jun 12, 2009 11:40 am

    I was walking down to town and I came across an old woman lying on the pavement with blood coming out of her head. the first thing I thought that could of happened is that a car had hit the woman and knocked her down onto the pavement, I cried.

    zoewooller

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    Age : 22
    Location : stafford

    mini saga competition

    Post  zoewooller on Fri Jun 12, 2009 11:41 am

    I was walking home from school. I thought it was going to be a normal calm walk home with my mates, Mollie and Sarah. It turned out not to be though. As I turned down my street, I was faced with a really big problem. The school bully Mollie Smith.

    *pixie*

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    Location : Sir Graham Balfour

    Don't wish your life away...

    Post  *pixie* on Fri Jun 12, 2009 11:46 am

    I wished I could become invisible. Just so all the bullies would go away. Leave me alone.
    Well I spent so much time wishing this my personality disappeared. I was left a shivering wreck. I told them to go away but they wouldn’t. So do just wish your life away.

    SJolliffe

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    Post  SJolliffe on Fri Jun 12, 2009 11:46 am

    It was a scorching hot day; I was walking in a forest. All of a sudden I fell down a large hole. I got up and walked ahead, I was surrounded by sand. I heard a loud clapping noise, my hands started shaking. Turning around it was a large scorpion!!!
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    Steven2009

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    The Old Man

    Post  Steven2009 on Fri Jun 12, 2009 11:46 am

    The Old man walked down the street.
    The Old man saw a carrot.
    He walked over to the carrot.
    He ate the carrot.
    The carrot gave him powers.
    He dropped his walking stick.
    And his shopping bags.
    He hovered off the floor.
    He picked up his bags.
    And flew away.
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    Kateford388

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    Location : In my living room!

    Sunset Mermaid

    Post  Kateford388 on Fri Jun 12, 2009 12:33 pm

    Awakened by my bedroom lit up by the morning rays, I was ready to go. I got there in a flash, the water cascaded down from the heavens above; I sat down and thought of the beautiful waterfall. it was getting late, it was time to swim into the sunset.

    singhi961

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    jungle riot

    Post  singhi961 on Fri Jun 12, 2009 1:09 pm

    i was in the jujngle searching suddenly i saw a lion as big as old trafford then a tiger came it was a jungle riot. i was doomed
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    katieee! x

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    Re: Mini Saga Competition!

    Post  katieee! x on Fri Jun 12, 2009 9:15 pm

    Walking along the eerie corridor. Silence. The dripping of taps, the beeping of alarms. As I turned the corner to walk down the stairs, something moved. Something was still roaming the school. I hurried to my locker. It swung open by itself. Something was there. It wanted to get me!
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    kayleigh1104

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    Mini saga contest

    Post  kayleigh1104 on Fri Jun 12, 2009 9:37 pm

    Walking down the streets late that night, I heard a cry, Oh no I thought. Someone must be hurt. I hurried out the door, into the cold streets that night.”Help! ” An old woman cried.”My cat is stuck up a tree!” All that for a black and white cat!

    the jokerrrrr aka blu

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    Re: Mini Saga Competition!

    Post  the jokerrrrr aka blu on Fri Jun 12, 2009 10:23 pm

    how do u rite a story man
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    kayleigh1104

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    to blueeeeeeeeeeeeee

    Post  kayleigh1104 on Fri Jun 12, 2009 10:28 pm

    with words lol
    i dunno just be creative and think of a title or a storyline and it should get ur started

    Taz0196

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    mini saga story

    Post  Taz0196 on Mon Jun 15, 2009 10:02 pm

    There it was. The door creaked as I slowly opened it and stepped inside. The door slammed shut behind me, it was very quiet until…I heard a loud scream coming from the room behind me. I was about to run until I felt a cold hand on my shoulder… Exclamation
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    katieee! x

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    Re: Mini Saga Competition!

    Post  katieee! x on Mon Jun 15, 2009 10:37 pm

    it was too dark. too eerie. i could feel the mist. taste the damp. smell the fog. i shouldnt be out here, not at this time of night. i was alone, but everywhere felt so alive. dark shadows. cold breaths. silence. running away from the night. that is just impossible!
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    dunky

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    Re: Mini Saga Competition!

    Post  dunky on Wed Jun 17, 2009 2:38 pm

    On the floor I saw a shine about twenty meters away. But so did Jonathan wood. We ran at the shine. I pushed him down so he tackled me. A cop came round the corner and arrested the man.i looked down and it turned out it was a 1p coin.
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    dunky

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    Re: Mini Saga Competition!

    Post  dunky on Wed Jun 17, 2009 2:39 pm

    A man walked down the street laughed and walked away.
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    dunky

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    Re: Mini Saga Competition!

    Post  dunky on Wed Jun 17, 2009 3:11 pm

    a man was skydiving when his parachute would not open so he said god help. but after said oh allah help me a hand came out the clouds and put him on the ground he said thank god and then a big foot came out the cloud and smoush. splat!!!!

    mr posthill

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    Competition Update!

    Post  mr posthill on Wed Jun 17, 2009 9:43 pm

    Going really well so far ladies and gents.
    I'm really pleased with the responses so far. There have been some brill stories and some not so brill ones so far.
    I'm really looking forward to hearing the rest.
    Don't forget...competetion sends on Friday 26th June and the winner will be announced on this thread the following Monday!

    Good look everyone!

    Very Happy

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