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    My Gothic Story starter!

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    Howard100

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    Join date : 2009-06-08

    My Gothic Story starter!

    Post  Howard100 on Mon Jun 08, 2009 10:25 pm

    My Gothic Story starter

    As i entered the bleak emerald forest the wind whistled like it was trying to whisper it's song, it was dusk, the nocturnal animals had risen from the dorment daylight state and were prowling like a restless army of hell. The waterfall cascaded from the steep rock like the long wavy hair of an aqua maiden. it's a legend 'they' are here on the 31st of october every year, many don't believe it but i do, afterall i am one of them now, trapped in this eternal void of misery because the 31st of october is the day i died.

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    Mrs P
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    a figurative feast

    Post  Mrs P on Tue Jun 09, 2009 2:46 pm

    A fab opening Chloe. Excellent use of alliteration and similes. Some really sophisticated vocab too. Definately a contender for the competition. Reults on Thursday!

    Mrs Posthill

    Mr_Moran

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    Re: My Gothic Story starter!

    Post  Mr_Moran on Tue Jun 09, 2009 10:41 pm

    I really enjoyed this, immediately grabbed my attention.

    My only advice would be to add to it, as you have an excellent starting point.

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