Mini Saga Competition!

Okay Ladies and Gentleman welcome to a new competition for the Creative Writing Club.

We want you to write a story...sounds simple doesn't it?
well its not that easy. Your story must be no longer than 50 words and must have a clear beginning, middle and an end.
Your story can be about anything you like. It might: have a twist at the end, contain speech, it can use similes and / or metaphors. However...

The competition is open to any student from any year group in any school (lets make this eclectic). All entries must be submitted into this topic forum and will be judged by myself and my selected team. All entries must be submitted by no later than Friday 26th June (That's nearly three weeks). You can enter as many times as you like but make sure that each entry is on a seprate post.
And for those of you still looking for inspiration...read on!

Sir thats 51 if you count it your self and i didnt count no-one as 2 words
And i counted it about 4 times lol

Okay okay its 51...see i said it was tough!
get rid of It from 'I pushed it'.
There!

hahaha

I looked down the steep hill my heart started to beat harder I heared the shouting of the angry croud their faces red with disappointment" you promised us a less polluted river" " you didn't even show up" we could see your heart was not in it"
clouds started to build.

The boy stared, an evil glare. He spotted his target. "Go on lads!" He shouted. "Go on, do it!" They walked towards this thing. The boys surrounded the target, a look of fear. Pure, Pure fear. Would anyone help? Noone was around. This poor defenceless thing. Alone. All alone. Forever.

I was walking along a dark and wet alley way when I heard a splash in one of the tiny puddles it wasn’t me I started to walk faster then I heard another I started to run then all of a sudden a little creature jump out, a little cat!

I slowly walked into the woods. There it was it took me by surprise it was the famous big foot he said “hello my friend.” I started running out of the woods I could hear myself breathing heavily I looked back. it had gone, I turned around it was there.

I was walking down to town and I came across an old woman lying on the pavement with blood coming out of her head. the first thing I thought that could of happened is that a car had hit the woman and knocked her down onto the pavement, I cried.

I was walking home from school. I thought it was going to be a normal calm walk home with my mates, Mollie and Sarah. It turned out not to be though. As I turned down my street, I was faced with a really big problem. The school bully Mollie Smith.

I wished I could become invisible. Just so all the bullies would go away. Leave me alone.
Well I spent so much time wishing this my personality disappeared. I was left a shivering wreck. I told them to go away but they wouldn’t. So do just wish your life away.

It was a scorching hot day; I was walking in a forest. All of a sudden I fell down a large hole. I got up and walked ahead, I was surrounded by sand. I heard a loud clapping noise, my hands started shaking. Turning around it was a large scorpion!!!

The Old man walked down the street.
The Old man saw a carrot.
He walked over to the carrot.
He ate the carrot.
The carrot gave him powers.
He dropped his walking stick.
And his shopping bags.
He hovered off the floor.
He picked up his bags.
And flew away.

Awakened by my bedroom lit up by the morning rays, I was ready to go. I got there in a flash, the water cascaded down from the heavens above; I sat down and thought of the beautiful waterfall. it was getting late, it was time to swim into the sunset.

i was in the jujngle searching suddenly i saw a lion as big as old trafford then a tiger came it was a jungle riot. i was doomed

Walking along the eerie corridor. Silence. The dripping of taps, the beeping of alarms. As I turned the corner to walk down the stairs, something moved. Something was still roaming the school. I hurried to my locker. It swung open by itself. Something was there. It wanted to get me!

Walking down the streets late that night, I heard a cry, Oh no I thought. Someone must be hurt. I hurried out the door, into the cold streets that night.”Help! ” An old woman cried.”My cat is stuck up a tree!” All that for a black and white cat!

how do u rite a story man

with words lol
i dunno just be creative and think of a title or a storyline and it should get ur started

There it was. The door creaked as I slowly opened it and stepped inside. The door slammed shut behind me, it was very quiet until…I heard a loud scream coming from the room behind me. I was about to run until I felt a cold hand on my shoulder…

it was too dark. too eerie. i could feel the mist. taste the damp. smell the fog. i shouldnt be out here, not at this time of night. i was alone, but everywhere felt so alive. dark shadows. cold breaths. silence. running away from the night. that is just impossible!

On the floor I saw a shine about twenty meters away. But so did Jonathan wood. We ran at the shine. I pushed him down so he tackled me. A cop came round the corner and arrested the man.i looked down and it turned out it was a 1p coin.

A man walked down the street laughed and walked away.

a man was skydiving when his parachute would not open so he said god help. but after said oh allah help me a hand came out the clouds and put him on the ground he said thank god and then a big foot came out the cloud and smoush. splat!!!!

Going really well so far ladies and gents.
I'm really pleased with the responses so far. There have been some brill stories and some not so brill ones so far.
I'm really looking forward to hearing the rest.
Don't forget...competetion sends on Friday 26th June and the winner will be announced on this thread the following Monday!

Good look everyone!