Mini Saga Competition!

Creak.... Oh No!!! There was someone in the House with me. My mum had left me on my own to go clubbing. Crash!!Bang!! It suddenly grabbed me I was on the floor bleeding. They had stabbed me. Before I could scream they hit me and carried me away. Help!!


P.s You can still hear the screaming if you find his house
mwah hahahaaaaaaa

Going home that evening and this guy comes up to me. “Oi you” I ran for my life. What had I done wrong? My mate turns round and boots him one. “Leave her alone”
“Ouch. I was only trying to give her this purse she dropped “
“Oh! Err sorry"

Kay.G wrote:One gloomy day, there was a ghost. He tryed hitting his worst enemy, who was a human,but his hand just went right through. He went and found a knife. He went to the human and stabbed in the heart. And the ghost went to kill his next worst emeny.

kayleigh no offence but this sorta doesnt make sense sorry

Kay i sort of know what you mean. Katie its like he tries to kill his worst enemy etc and then he goes off to kill his next worst enemy. i think your last story was really good katie.

katieee! x wrote:

Kay.G wrote:One gloomy day, there was a ghost. He tryed hitting his worst enemy, who was a human,but his hand just went right through. He went and found a knife. He went to the human and stabbed in the heart. And the ghost went to kill his next worst emeny.

kayleigh no offence but this sorta doesnt make sense sorry

no i mean where it says 'stabbed in the heart' i know what the story means its just that little phrase that doesnt make sense x